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I don His tent was made out of leather and the dust of memories. He has invited me without words, just his secret smile lures me in his world, this state between past and future. He wears a white shirt with black letters that has an important message, but I didn't know that when I saw him. He looked strange and wonderful, his black eyes were magical and so dreamy, he has already woken up.

I enter the tent and I see fire in the corner that looks supernatural. He holds me without words, first it was a friendly hug, but after a few seconds I feel a deep emotional wave. He starts to touch my hair, he smells it.

-''Why do you smell like lavender ''– he asks me…..''My pillow smells like your hair'' he said after small break.

-''I washed my hair with an organic shampoo…''- I was in awe…

-''Oh, we should drink tea'' –he broke the silence and the exciting atmosphere. The passion between us started growing, at this moment warmth in his eyes made me more upset …

He prepared tea and said that my brown hair is very beautiful…

-''This is not my natural color, I dye it `cause my hair is a little bit gray''- I try to justify…I looked at his hair, it was dark shining, almost perfect…

There was no table in the tent, so we sat on the bed. He smiles. I don't remember when we started kissing…and who started first. Outside was quiet. I hear some enchanting melody in my ears. I feel like flying, like in some kind of magic ritual, some connection with the world and nature around me. First of all there's a magical connection with him, his spirit and that powerful sensibility.

I lost control, I don't remember what happened after…..just that I know that I fell asleep.

When I woke up I was alone with the dark silence around me. I noticed that I had a bat in my hair, which was asleep. So quietly I took the knife from the corner improvising as if it were a kitchen knife and cut off all my hair. Today my hair is long again, but it's raven dark. I don't know why, really don't know, and I can't hide the two scars from the bat bites on my neck.


(just a story)
  • Mood: Spring Fever
  • Listening to: Pantera
  • Reading: poetry
  • Watching: you tube
  • Eating: nothing
  • Drinking: water

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Mood: Love *COLOREDINLOVE Mar 1, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Love your stories..I can see this in my mind..a romantic sensual night...caught up in desire and kiss of the vampire..Hugs!!:iconoveyouplz:
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:iconstefymoondust:
thank you Brenda, so glad that you like my story and so glad that I see you again, hope ur doing well, i put watermark on my pic again, tell me if you like it for photomanip, i`ll remove it ;-)
wish you a lovely weekend :-)
hugs & kisses
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Mood: Love *COLOREDINLOVE Mar 2, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I love your stories..so much love and desire!
I am better...thanks so much honey..Yes remove the mark and link it to me..I have some things in mind...maybe a dark sexy one? Colorful? Tell me what you want....Then we will see what I can do!
Have a wonderful lovely weekend too!
Hugs and kisses~:iconloveyouplz:
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:iconstefymoondust:
here is it [link] i think dark is better, look forward to see your work
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Mood: Love *COLOREDINLOVE Mar 1, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:iconloveyouplz::iconkisssplz:
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Mood: Satisfied *UmericanPiece Mar 1, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
very Good immediate play-by-play
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:iconsaza11:
awesome sweetie :heart:
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:iconstefymoondust:
thanks dear Saza
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Mood: Love *analillithbar Mar 1, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Cute lil piece of flash fiction.
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